![]() The world where the prison system is now a virtual reality game where if you are a criminal you get kicked around plenty of times. ![]() There are moments that appear interesting that are followed by vast stretches of boredom. The experience is reminiscent of watching over the shoulder of someone else playing a computer role-playing game. What? You didn't expect this did you? Yes, that's what I'm like."Īs another reviewer mentioned, the perspective also randomly changes between present and past tense, making it necessary to re-read passages repeatedly in order to figure out what the author was attempting to get across. The orc narrowed his eyes, piercing me with his gaze. He almost jumped off the chair, wishing to quickly run to me and snatch, take and appropriate everything I had. ![]() ![]() "Yes, I did recently make a few crafted items," I replied and saw the regional governor's eyes fire up. A good proofreader/editor could have alleviated a lot of the problems with this story. I understand that the author is not a native English speaker but the prose in this book is horribly stilted and downright painful to read at times. ![]()
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